Thesis statement: Although many young people want to leave their family home immediately after high school, the transition can be quite difficult.

I. cooking

A. How much does it cost?

B. How much time/effort does it require?

c. how healthy is it

II. cleaning

a. Common areas

a. Bathroom

b. Clothes

3. bill-paying

A. creating a budget

B. Planning for future expenses

What changes would you need to make to the outline to make it follow correct outline structure?