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Read the sentence.
As a new employee you are responsible for stocking merchandise, tracking orders, removing old stock, replace orders, and sales of new
merchandise.
What two revisions would correct the parallelism errors in the sentence?
changing "stocking merchandise" to "stock merchandise
changing "tracking orders" to "to track orders
changing "removing old stock" to "removal of old stock
changing "replace orders to replacing orders"
changing "sales of new merchandise" to "selling new merchandise

Select All The Correct Answers Read The Sentence As A New Employee You Are Responsible For Stocking Merchandise Tracking Orders Removing Old Stock Replace Order class=

Answer :

Answer:

changing "replace orders to replacing orders"

changing "sales of new merchandise" to "selling new merchandise

Explanation:

present tense not past

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Two revisions would correct the parallelism errors in the sentence are

  • changing "replace orders to replacing orders"
  • changing "sales of new merchandise" to "selling new merchandise.

What are parallelism errors?

When the sentences in a sequence do not share the same language structures, parallelism emerges. A sentence frequently has a collection of ideas that are conveyed in a number of different words, phrases, or clauses. These shows all discuss the same subject.

In the sentence,"As a new employee you are responsible for stocking merchandise, tracking orders, removing old stock, replace orders, and sales of new merchandise." shows a similar sentence structure except for the phrase "replace orders and sales of new merchandise".

This phrase shows the emergence of parallelism errors in the sentence due to not having the similar structure of tenses followed earlier in the sentence.

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