What is the main problem with this introduction paragraph? Imagine being one of only a handful of your species left on Earth. Most recent counts show that there are only six northern white rhinos left in the world. These beautiful creatures are on the brink of extinction because of poaching, or illegal hunting. This is a terrible situation. It is something that could affect everyone. A. It does not restate the main points of the essay. B. It includes opinions instead of just facts. O C. The hook does not relate to the topic. D. The thesis statement is unclear.
Any opinions put into an educational text brings the credibility down. The use of subjective words such as beautiful is considered to be an opinion, as it doesn't mean the same thing to everybody.
