can you check my song and make sure something does not need to be changed please tell me i wont be mad ok.
Ive tried:
I have tried to play it all cool around you but when I look at you my heart melts for you every time, I am with you, but I can breathe when I am with you, but I knew that it might be wrong to have a crush on you yeahh but you are not the boy for me yeah but without a doubt you will be in my head forever I only talk about you yeah but somehow There’s a place that I met you for the very first time I met you but I wish I have never met you and this would never happen to me yeah.
It's pretty good i just think the part to where you say "but i can breathe when i am with you" sounds a little bit off like maybe you can try to say when i'm around you i can finally breathe or something
